Guy: Okay babe, I'll see you in a few minutes. Girl: Okay, your roommate's here and he brought Wendy's.
**Cut to guy about to put keys into his apartment door. He pauses because he hears something. Puts his ear to the door and hears heavy breathing.**
Girl: hoo! ahh! hoo! ahh! etc. etc. Roommate: woooh! oh man! so hot! oooof! etc. etc.
**Guy bursts in to his apartment full of rage! Girl and Roommate are sitting at the kitchen table eating Wendys Hot Chicken Nuggets. Awkward glances back and forth between Guy, Girl and Roommate. Roommate offers Guy his own cup of Nuggets.
Guess what, they are probably the target market. Young dorky collage students who share a space, don't have girl friends, and only have $5 a day for food and $50 a day for alcohol.
Lame commercial for lame people. It will sell. Thats the sad part.
Imagine the pitch meeting for that bit of genius.
ReplyDeletehere's a better pitch:
ReplyDelete**Guy walking down the street on the phone.**
Guy: Okay babe, I'll see you in a few minutes.
Girl: Okay, your roommate's here and he brought Wendy's.
**Cut to guy about to put keys into his apartment door. He pauses because he hears something. Puts his ear to the door and hears heavy breathing.**
Girl: hoo! ahh! hoo! ahh! etc. etc.
Roommate: woooh! oh man! so hot! oooof! etc. etc.
**Guy bursts in to his apartment full of rage! Girl and Roommate are sitting at the kitchen table eating Wendys Hot Chicken Nuggets. Awkward glances back and forth between Guy, Girl and Roommate. Roommate offers Guy his own cup of Nuggets.
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Great pitch!
ReplyDeleteIt's sure better than the one in the video.
ReplyDeleteI think it's the 2nd guy smiling and pawing at himself that makes it super creepy
ReplyDeleteGuess what, they are probably the target market.
ReplyDeleteYoung dorky collage students who share a space, don't have girl friends, and only have $5 a day for food and $50 a day for alcohol.
Lame commercial for lame people. It will sell. Thats the sad part.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aaLvXXd6stg
ReplyDeleteSimilar-ish idea from Australia